I am a published author and I began writing my book, the third “Rush. A novel” If you know what it is my Profile page top where you can see my questions, and it must want to be at: ” Is this a good story for my book? ” I wrote what I did. ‘I first chapter so far, please tell me what you think, Thank you:). Chapter someName, Regina Elizabeth Rushell age 16 Love, sunny days, swimming, beach status … … Orphan, I thought. I never thought it would come so far. I do not still believe what happened. My whole family is dead, disappeared. She died three weeks ago in a car accident. My parents raised me for 16 years, forever. My little sister Lucy is gone gone. I remember her little round face and blonde hair that was always tied up in pigtails. I remember her smile, and when she laughs things. We had a good life in Louisiana, was a farmer father and his mother was in real estate. I remember when my father would throw huge bar-b-as parties for the neighborhood and all the kids flocked to our house, but now its all gone. I never thought that I would be sitting in a car with Mrs.Ryan, the social worker on the way to my new home in Connecticut. “Are you excited to see where you live in Regina?” Mrs.Ryan. said: “It’s Rush,” I said again. I’ve always known as Rush, I do not remember a time when I did not, except when I was in school when they inserted part. They did not say “Rushell Rush.” Mrs.Ryan sighed… “Now you are living with the family names of the parents are Mike Cameron and Lisa Cameron, Mike is a writer for Scientific American, Lisa is a realtor, you have six children, the youngest is six years old. her name is Gracie. Then, there are twelve twins named Max and Maria. And then there is a girl of sixteen and eighteen named Courtney named Jake. You and Courtney could be best friends since they were the same age. you and Courtney and Jake is in high Greshman together, I really think you like it here. “The car turned into the driveway of a neat four-story house with white columns resting shelves. It was the biggest house I’ve ever seen in my life! “Here we are!” Mrs.Ryan said as she helped me with my luggage. “Remember to smile and be polite.” Mrs.Ryan rang, and opened the door after a few moments. A tall woman with long brown hair and brown eyes opened the door. She was beautiful, she looked like a cross between Angelina Jolie and Drew Barrymore. She was pretty, with chistled cheekbones. But you could see Drew Barrymore in the mouth and eyes, so it was not too hard. “Hello,” said her: “I am Lisa You have to be Regina, to go.”.

response from Kianna
I’m sorry, but you can not author a published author not be publié.Un his stories on the Internet, before or after it on … I’m not saying your writing is so bad. But it could still be improved somewhat.