I need help correcting my CV HELP !!!!?
I need help correcting my CV HELP !!!!?
SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONSprofessionnels high energy with good interpersonal skills and communication with many years experience in the following broad competencies: Representative Client Director GÉNÉRALSERVICE TELEMARKETIGINVENTAIRE recepcionista (Mexico) skills Excellent customer service with a thorough knowledge of management, team building, problem solving and project implementation. motivated and dynamic, which not only works very effectively in a team environment but also how indépendante.EXPERIENCE professionnelle valeria Bar and rumors, Mexico Tepic Nayarit 13/02/2008 – Translation General 12/28/10Directeur • Create and “rumors Bar “project • Designed and built with the bar interiors • Mentoring and Tutoring 4 partners • Sales and … Gain prominence. • Participate and Inauguration Hotel Valeria worked. • Increased clientele with the creation of “rumors Bar” bet on the hotel scene competitors. • Helps position at the front desk / reception. Casa Nayarit, non-profit organization. Santa Ana, CA 08/20/2007 – 02/10/08Directeur • Funds collected donations to support charitable projects Nayarit immigrants • Promoting our culture and traditions in Southern California • Organized and multi-cultural festival .. participated in parades in the local community. • Motivated and encouraged younger colleagues on the basis of success and social responsibility. • Public Relations set up. • Leadership training. • Learning to live together and work with others. Building Dreams Investments, Inc. 2007 Duarte 2008Assistant Managerréceptionniste ReceptionService • Customer Service • Telemarketing • Mortgages • Coordination • Organized files, data entry and billing clients.ER car insurance and benefits Azusa profesional 2003 2006Représentant the customer ventesService • • • increase in sales receptionist Front. • Filling INS applications for customers. • Organized files and seizure of Pasadena, California données.Voyage Azusa & Tours 1999-2003Représentant customer ventesService • • • • Increase ventesRéceptionniste reception ouverteréservations flight reservation • Input données.Education: Gladstone High School CA CovinaDiplômeGlendora West Citrus Community College in CalifornieLes générale cours Special classes Real Estate course and motivation. Improvement (Imel) processing prêt.Langues: Knowledge of English and Spanish
reply by Rachelle
qualifications Nice.! Make a nice size when you print it. Overall, I have a few suggestions:-At the apex telemarketing services, you must consistently the “standard recepcionista the” Keep-capitalization. • For example, Pasadena, California Travel & Tours 1999-Azusa 2003Représentant ventesService the customer • Increase sales increase ——–> ventesRéceptionniste • Front • flight reservation flight reservation booking — —-> • Data entry. ——> Data EntryAussi if you agree to keep everything in the past, during the whole life cycle. For example: increase sales, limited flight bookings, etcGood luck!
When I was laid off a few years ago the company sent us to a place that helped us refine our resumes and interviewing skills. One of the things they told me to do with my resume was to make the first paragraph a summary of my skills and qualifications. For you it might read something like;
PROFESSIONAL SUMMARY
Twelve years experience working in retail and service industries. Seven years as a sales and customer service rep and five years as Director and General Manager. Excellent qualifications in customer service with a comprehensive knowledge of management, team building, problem solving and project execution. Self-motivated and proactive committed individual who works not only highly efficient on a team environment but also independently.
Then put in several bullets listing your specific skills such as computer programs that you’re proficient in, those Special Courses and Language skills, any licenses or certifications that you have and things like that.
SKILLS AND ACHIEVEMENTS
All important skill should be right at the top of the resume where people see it. This is not the place to put things like people skills or things like that.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
In your work history after your job title put 1-2 sentences that describe very briefly who the company is and what you did there.
Hotel Valeria and Rumors Bar, Tepic Nayarit Mexico 02/13/08 – 12/28/10
General Manager
5 star, Oceanside resort which caters to the single professional on holiday. I spearheaded the team which designed the interior and set up the very successful inauguration of the resort.
Also you have to many bullets on them. Stick with 2-3, 4 at the most and make them count. It is better if they are quantifiable. Such as;
• Created and put together the “Rumors Bar” project which resulted in 3 new locations opening up in a 12 month period.
• Worked on fund raising to earn money to support Nayarit immigrants community projects and raised 15% more money than in previous years.
• Headed up a team which revised the Loan coordinating procedures which decreased the lead time on the paperwork from 4 days to 2 days.
Do you see what I mean? Having the numbers in the bullet makes it more meaningful and memorable to the person reading the resume. Most HR people will spend less than a minute looking at your resume so you want to hit the high points.
Even if you don’t have a number to put to the bullet it’s best to explain what you did a bit more, such as;
* Designed all large windows using color as primary focus.
* Organized floor displays to maximize space and call attention to latest merchandise.
* Utilized strong interpersonal and communications skills to serve customers; received employee of the month award twice.
Your bullet points can be a bit more wordy if you have fewer of them and it will be more effective. Things like “Built Public Relations” doesn’t mean much unless you put some specifics with it. What did you do to build PR and what was the result?