Question : What do you think, it’s the first chapter of this book I’m working on!?
Title; Simply Sadee.
Chapter 1; I knew my life was a waste, I was wasted space in our universe. And anyone that didnt believe me could go ask my mom, she is actually the person that told me, “Sadee if you want to make something of yourself you need to act, or sing.” not model. My mom use to be in a old sopopra but it didnt get enough views so canceled after the second season. My mom Diann played a neighbor of the main character, my mom was mainly giving them advice and helping take care of there kids, out of 20 epsisodes my mom was in about 9. But my mom thinks some day people from universal studios will ask her to come down for an episode of CSI or something like that. Any ways, I cant act because i think acting is a fake way of being something your not for the entertainment of others, in fact i know thats exactly what it is. Singing, is my dream. I can sing so good and the words flow, its just beautiful but, I’m so stage fright that i shake on stange. Once when i was 6 years old I was in a Ballet performance, and i puke on the girls in front of me dancing, there was only 25 people there, and it was the family from the 5 dancers. The lights shining on me felt like they are burning my skin, i begin to sweat and my hands start trembling, I studder, nothing goes right. Singing is not ment for me, at all. Dian doesnt even expect me to model, she knows some one like me with big feet, long legs, long arms and curly black hair wasnt ment to be pretty. Sure I’m tall, but I’m not skinny, I’m not fat, I’m just average. I’m Simply Sadee May Clarks, and I dont know what i want with my life.

My dad left when i was 8. He was truly my everything. We’d play basketball with my two brothers while my younger sister was the cheerleader. My dad always took my sister and I for ice creem then we’d go to walmart and we’d each have 25 dollars for clothes and 25 dollars for toys. My poor sister Destiny doesnt remember my dad, all she remembers is he cared. Dian is kind of like the kind of person that when we turn 18 and we havent made it big by then she wont want anything too do with us, she practically doesnt already!
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Thats just the first few chapters, but am i on a good start. Here’s a summary of where i think i’m going to write about,

Sadee is a simple girl who lives with her 3 siblings Matt 16 , Sebastion, 14 and Destiny 9. Sadee is becoming of age and her body is changing in new ways, she does have a mother but her mother Dian (an old washed up sopopra star) is about as useless as a rock, that melted. Sadee lost her dad when she was about 8 and the only thing she has in this world is her amazing voice, But can Sadee concore her extreme stage fright for some stardom?
:) whatcha think?
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Best answer:

Answer by Author :Kiara Gilbert
As an author myself, and talking to my personal editor, all I need to say is maybe a C+?